Tuesday, October 17, 2017

Writing a formal letter

Writing a formal letter

What were your next steps that you set at the start of this unit. Copy and paste the next steps from your doc called letter writing checking my first attempt.

I need to add in the date to my letter Writing and I also need to have an address for where the letter needs to to sent to and also my school address.

Which of these next steps did you achieve?
I have achieved all of these next steps in my letter writing.

Which of these next steps did you NOT achieve? Why do you think this was?
I achieved all of them.



Overall what have you learned about writing a formal letter.

I have learnt many things about writing a letter when I wrote my first attempt of the letter I think that I did very well for my first attempt because I had only missed two things but when I did my second letter I had fixed up the two things that I had missed out.

Treat of Waitangi


Tuesday, September 26, 2017

WALT:Write an effective argument for our chosen political party.

WALT: Write an effective argument for our chosen political party.


Who will you vote for?
Personally I really don’t care who wins, but if I HAD to vote for a party I would vote for National. Furthermore, I think that National is a good party because they are doing more things to help the community. The points that I am going to cover are child obesity, people in apprenticeship and to build a new hospital in Dunedin.The first thing that I am going to talk about is childhood obesity.

National wants to continue to implement a plan to reduce childhood obesity. National believes that childhood obesity increases the risk of poor health for people throughout their lives.This is a good policy because then there would be less children that are obesity.This is a good policy because then there would be many more children that are able to do many sporting activities.This leads me to my second policy on why I think National is a better party.

Aim to have 50,000 people in apprenticeships by 2020, I strongly believe that it will help all the people get jobs in the future and it will be good for the community. It will prevent unemployment and it will help owners choose easily. It will be better if we all have an entry into the job we want life will be much easier. This leads me to my last policy for National, It is good to have a job but it is good to have hospitals around the world and in NZ.

Build a new hospital in Dunedin, Because the hospital in Dunedin is very old, and it could use an upgrade.I can help the students in otago university to learn what qualification they need to achieve to operate a patient. The hospital is too old, for example this leads to cracks and the building falling down. I am now going to talk about a poor policy from Labour.

A poor policy for Labour is to abolish National Standards. I think that we shouldn't get rid of National Standards because they help students in many ways. I think that this is a bad policy because some students like to know there goals that they are trying to work towards on the other hand they are also able to show friends if they have achieved something special. My second reason why I think that this is a bad policy is because the teachers are able to show the students parents on how well their child is doing with their goals and Standards. This brings me onto my three reason why National is a better party.

Overall I have covered many things why National is a great party. Furthermore, National policies are very in health because they are going to be building a new hospital in Dunedin.The points that I have covered are child obesity, people in apprenticeship and to build a new hospital in Dunedin. Clearly you know who I am voting for, who are you voting for?





My next steps are: to add some more rhetorical questions.

Thursday, September 21, 2017

Koru games reflection


In the Koru Games the sport I competed in was… Netball

Our team won… 6 games and we came 12th overall out of 32 teams.

I found the experience to be...very good because… we came across many hard games and some easy games, we also work very well as a team.

In terms of working with Individuals and Groups; my solo level is… Extended abstract because… our whole team were able to work well together and communicate very well.

For Teamwork; my solo level is…Relational because… We were good at communicating on the court but some got a little frustrated.



Individuals and groups
I need help to work in a group (with teachers or other students
I can work in a group with my friends.
I can work in a group with anyone in my  year level or team  


I can respond positively to the needs of others
I can reflect on how well I work with the group and seek feedback on how I can improve
Teamwork

I need help to interact with others.

I need help to participate in a team.
I can interact with others one to one.

I can participate in a team.
I can interact with others in a small group.

I can participate and take responsibility in a team.

I can participate and take responsibility in a team and explain my choices in terms of team outcomes.
I can participate in creating healthy teams by taking responsibility and critical action.

Thursday, September 7, 2017

Book review Term 2

Book review Term 2

The book that I have read that I have most enjoyed is the book called smile because it is a funny enjoyable book to read The part that I enjoyed the most is when she had a beautiful smile again after her accident that she had. I would rate this book a ten out of ten because I love the end result because the end result was great to see what they were able to do to help.

Writing a formal letter

Writing a formal letter What were your next steps that you set at the start of this unit. Copy and paste the next steps from your doc c...